I wonder about the most effective way to write about smells in my novel. When I think about narration, I don't ever want my writing to feel like I'm just checking off a list of sensory information ("Okay, I included what someone looked like, what they heard, what they smelled, etc.). I want sensory details to be included when they should. This means that I need to spend more time putting myself into the characters' shoes and setting, and writing about what's noticeable, and relevant to character and plot development.
I think I need training wheels, though. It'll help for me to think about powerful smells for me:
Smells I enjoy:
- Wood burning in a fireplace
- Rain approaching
- Freshly cut grass
- Pine trees (especially in our house at Christmas time)
- Apple Flower and Oahu scented candles (Bath and Body Works)
- Incense
- Freshly baked bread, cookies, or cake
- Carol's Daughter's Chocolat Shampoo and Conditioner (discontinued 😔)
- Lilacs
- Clean laundry
- Coffee brewing
- New books
- Fuel
- Burning rubber
- Bleach
- Public restrooms
- Well . . . skunk spray
- Vomit (😫)
- Sour milk
- Our dog's farts
- Something rotting (like a dead mouse)
Okay... Smells I enjoy: that smell outside that signals summer's coming, kinda musty
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the aroma of after glow with your dad, there is a definite pheromone smell that comforts.
Calyx and Be Delicious perfume mix, the only perfume I use.
Baby Magic lotion in the pink bottle. (don't think they make it any more)
Watermelon
Cucumbers
Fried bacon
Fresh brewed coffee
A new born's neck
Smells I don't prefer:
fasting breath
sour/stink butt
body stench of a derelict in a closed space like a train
rotting fish
weed, that kind they call "loud" I hate that!
I could go on and on in graphic detail, but I'll just say this; you know when somehow or another something gets on your fingers that kinda stinky and you keep sniffing at it anyway. It doesn't smell good but it doesn't really stink, like that smell you lift from behind your ears or your stud earrings!! Lol, wash your hands!!!